10 August 2012

SFFS: "Genesis" Continues

Welcome to another installment of Science Fiction Fantasy Saturday on the blog. Thanks for all the feedback you give on my snippets, but be sure to go visit all of the other writers through the SFFS link above as well.

As mentioned last week, I'm slowly bringing out snippets from "Genesis," a story that I'd written long ago. So, if you didn't catch the previous snippets, here are a few links to get you back up to speed.

Snippet 1 from Genesis
Snippet 2 from Genesis
Snippet 3 from Genesis
Snippet 4 from Genesis 

And then, get a look at today's snippet:
“What’cha do that for?”

I mumbled, “It’s not polite to stare.”

“You didn’t have to hit me.” He rubbed his head.

I shot a sideways glance at the stranger as the rowdy group in the corner grew quiet for the first time. They were strangely interested in the new arrival, with each peering over, then leaning back in for a huddled conversation with the others.

I became very uncomfortable as his gaze fell on our table. I turned and scowled, but he smiled, reached inside his coat and pulled out a large cloth satchel. He made his way towards us in absolute confidence as I sat there totally confused.

As he neared our table, he uttered, “I was beginning to wonder if you’d ever show.”

Be sure to come back next week for yet another installment. Again, I always enjoy your comments!


  1. A stranger who obviously recognizes you? Intriguing, but good or bad?

  2. If there's cash in that cloth packet, I'm in! Don't care what it is! That's how adventures start.

  3. Oh man, I do NOT want to know what is in that sack.

  4. "What's in the sack? Tell me what's in the sack!" You know it's something bad. Absolutely.

  5. I'm just as bewildered as him, but I'm equally curious. I love that feeling. So, I'm thinking he's a messenger but for what, with what? Very interesting.

  6. Thanks for stopping by, everyone! Not to worry, I plan on keeping everyone in suspense for a few more weeks about what's in the bag...hee hee. ;-)


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