tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19846812.post3846714306647190111..comments2023-10-30T06:15:00.271-05:00Comments on The West(ern) Chronicles: SFFS: A Snippet From SEEKERT. M. Hunterhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04315726033990784930noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19846812.post-46806238399307897042012-12-10T20:54:20.532-06:002012-12-10T20:54:20.532-06:00Thanks!Thanks!T. M. Hunterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04315726033990784930noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19846812.post-58006336776558057512012-12-10T19:35:08.492-06:002012-12-10T19:35:08.492-06:00Who wouldn't be worried about a mental invasio...Who wouldn't be worried about a mental invasion... but when you have a head full of stuff that shouldn't get out...<br /><br />Poor Aston!<br /><br />But nice snippet!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19846812.post-28703728347957226762012-12-09T16:53:32.051-06:002012-12-09T16:53:32.051-06:00Aston's life often is. ;-)Aston's life often is. ;-)T. M. Hunterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04315726033990784930noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19846812.post-58568308237625877802012-12-09T15:15:23.272-06:002012-12-09T15:15:23.272-06:00Cool, freebie, will snatch it up. Love freebies fr...Cool, freebie, will snatch it up. Love freebies from writers i know!<br /><br />As for Our Hero, this sounds dire!Melisse Aireshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01478569639424075550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19846812.post-90627064114692686052012-12-08T23:45:47.967-06:002012-12-08T23:45:47.967-06:00Peter, Aston should definitely fear them, because ...Peter, Aston should definitely fear them, because it seems like every time he gets involved with one, it ends up badly for him. :-)<br /><br />Patrick, if only the aluminum foil would work... :-)<br /><br />Sue Ann, she's drop-dead gorgeous...but alas, all the description came in before this snippet. One of the hazards of the 10 sentence-limit.T. M. Hunterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04315726033990784930noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19846812.post-34919163651924102872012-12-08T19:58:35.261-06:002012-12-08T19:58:35.261-06:00So is the mind reader a pretty woman?So is the mind reader a pretty woman?Sue Ann Bowlinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17692320238497263942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19846812.post-76446738967734897502012-12-08T12:54:52.392-06:002012-12-08T12:54:52.392-06:00It also looks like he's not passing Go and col...It also looks like he's not passing Go and collecting $200, either. He'd better create a cap made from aluminum foil and fast!Patrick Stutzmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06701695102224164322noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19846812.post-86948554340577849412012-12-08T11:28:32.544-06:002012-12-08T11:28:32.544-06:00I love the officer's snide comment about feari...I love the officer's snide comment about fearing pretty women - the juxtaposition with Aston's final line is hilarious. Great snippet!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14612014503133683333noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19846812.post-29042173632623160002012-12-08T10:47:39.407-06:002012-12-08T10:47:39.407-06:00Thanks for stopping by, everyone! Yes, this is a g...Thanks for stopping by, everyone! Yes, this is a great galley walk scene (unfortunately, with only 10 sentences, you only catch this portion of it)...and I enjoyed writing the invasion scenes, myself.T. M. Hunterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04315726033990784930noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19846812.post-58598732408577278092012-12-08T09:41:01.322-06:002012-12-08T09:41:01.322-06:00You're right--I do like free things. I'll ...You're right--I do like free things. I'll happily take more time with Aston. Loved the snippet--his inner monologue is always so enjoyable to follow along. He's plain about his situations with a twist of smart-ass that's perfect. I also love the idea of a mind invader. The actual invasion has got to be an interesting scene. J.M. Blackmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12452636020480500983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19846812.post-84992175998048413242012-12-08T07:53:10.407-06:002012-12-08T07:53:10.407-06:00Great Snippet! Always a fan of the galley walk sc...Great Snippet! Always a fan of the galley walk scene and what goes through the character's head as they go. Makes for some interesting details - just like you did here.S.A. Checkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04682239850626207822noreply@blogger.com